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Thanks For Saving Me

"_______-san! Good morning!" Your Japanese friend, Kiku called, running over to you. He looked so cute in his grey beach shorts and baggy red top, along with red converse and a sweatband around his small forehead.
You smiled at him, waving.
"Good morning, Kiku! Ready to train?" You greeted, stretching your strong muscles. He nodded, stopping next to you.
"This was a good idea, ________-san. Ludwig is always too hard on us and Feliciano distracts me from training".
You blushed, fiddling with your own baggy shirt.
"Well? Wanna start?". Kiku nodded, his bangs slightly covering his face.
"Let's run a few laps and see where we go from there, yes?" You suggested.
Kiku agreed and took of running, with you following close behind. You both jogged into the woods, sun glittering through the autumn leaves.  
You looked over to your Japanese friend. He looked very content jogging through the calm woods, and seemed lost in thought. You smiled, admiring him.


"I don't no about this, aru" Yao whispered, hugging his panda tight.
"Dude, my ideas always work! CAUSE IM THE HERO!" Alfred screamed, before Arthur threw his hand up and slammed it on Alfred's huge mouth.
"Shut up, you git! You'll blow our cover!" He glared at Alfred, removing his hand from Al's mouth, while grimacing seeing as Alfred had licked his hand.
"It will work, Yao. Don't worry about it, da?" Ivan smiled, making Yao shiver.
"I'm not worried that it won't work, aru! It's just...._________'s special to Kiku. And he was once like my little brother" Yao informed, holding his panda even tighter.
"Ohonhonhon, don't worry, Yao. We'll take good care of her..." Francis smiled creepily at the small, old Chinese man, who frowned.
"Hey dudes! Look over there!" Alfred called in a whisper, peeking his head up from the bush. The others followed.
"It's Kiku and ________!" Arthur stated the obvious, smiling.
You and Kiku were both jogging through the woods, looking a little red but not slowing down much. Kiku's eyes were a little closed, breathing deeply as the calm air danced around him.
"Come on!" Arthur whispered, running to a bush closer to you while crouching. Alfred followed him, along with Francis. Ivan and Yao stood back a little.

Arthur crept up from the bush, sneaked a little behind you both, and grabbed hold of you, wrapping his hand around your mouth and pulling you forcefully into the Allies' hiding spot.
You struggled, screaming into the pale hand that silenced you, trying to pull your body from your captures. You opened your eyes to see large blue ones looking down on you.
"Dude! We caught her!" The blue eyed American shouted. You recognised that voice, it was Alfred F.Jones, a human representative of the United States.
You guessed that the other Allies were there, and you were right.
You were about to protest, until you were hit round the head by what felt like a metal pipe, and the last thing you heard was a distressed, "Aiyah...".


Kiku was starting to get tired, so he slowed down a little. Opening his eyes, he looked around to find his friend, ________, no where to be seen.
"__-________?" He choked out, his eyes darting rapidly around him.
He came to a sudden halt, panicking now. He whipped out his cell phone and dialled your number, heart racing.
He heard a small noise coming from behind the bushes, a ringing of some sort. He approached it, pulling the bush away from him, the noise becoming clearer.
Laying in the grass, ringing with a melodic tune, was your mobile phone, a little muddy from where it had obviously been dropped.
"_______-san's been here..." Kiku whispered, bending down to pick the phone up.
He brushed the dirt off the small device, then slipped it into his pocket. He ended the call from his phone and stepped behind the bush where he found the clue.
Looking around, he searched for anything else of yours. He spotted something stuck to the bark of the tree nearby. He moved closed, then recognised it. It was a fabric piece of Yao's clothing, it looked like it had been caught on the bark and ripped as he pulled on it.
"Allies." Kiku muttered, glaring at the fabric. He yanked on it, pulling it from the tree, and threw it to the ground, stepping angrily on it. And this was extremely strange for the small Japanese man. He was usually more introverted, but when it involved _________, he showed no mercy.
Pulling his katana out of no where, he stomped towards the axis' house, pushing open the door and slamming it behind him.


You woke with a pounding headache, trying to move your arms but finding them tied up. You started to scream, but the noise was muffled due to the gag wrapped around your mouth. You were seated on a wooden chair, legs tied together and upper body tied to the back of the seat. You fidgeted around, trying to break what was tying you.
"I wouldn't do that if I were you, _________" you heard a voice warn. It sounded like that stupid American, Alfred.
"Why the hell am I here?" You muffled through the gag, still struggling. You heard a chuckle, it sent shivers up your spine. You felt hands reach behind your head and detach the horrible fabric. As soon as it was taken off you started shouting.
"Let me go, assholes!" You screamed, kicking around.
"I don't think so, _________. Your perfect for our plan" An English accent spoke, in an intimidating tone.
"I..uh..what do you want from me?" You asked, stopping your protests.
"A little friend of yours.." Ivan whispered. You could hear the smirk in his voice.


Kiku felt himself fuming.
'How dare they capture _________! She's never done anything to them!' He shouted in his head.
Kiku laced up his boots and shined his katana, slipping it into its holder and speed walking outside. Ludwig and Feliciano were waiting there.
"I don't want to get hurt! England scares me!" Feliciano moaned, buried his head in his hands. Ludwig rolled his eyes.
"This is for the sake of _________. I'll never be able to live with myself if anything happened to her" Kiku muttered, looking sadly at the ground. Ludwig looked sadly at his friend, feeling empathy for him.
"Don't worry. Nothing's going to happen, she'll be okay" Ludwig assured, patting Kiku gently on the back. Kiku smiled softly.
"Come on" he instructed, walking towards the Axis' van. His friends followed.


You sat alone in the pitch black room, still tied up. You'd stopped screaming about an hour ago, as your voice had silenced and your throat began to sting. You sighed.
'I wonder what's going to happen to Kiku'.
You jumped as you heard a sudden crash and shouting from upstairs. You heard some slashing and pounding and then the door smashed open, revealing a panting, sweating Kiku, his katana in hand. He rushed over to you and cut through the ropes, letting you free. You smiled thankfully at him.
"Kiku! Thanks so much for saving me! Are you hurt? Did they do anything to you?" You questioned, fussing over him. He chuckled, softly, shaking his head.
"No. Arigatou, _________" He smiled, sliding his katana back into its case, and straightening himself out. You stood from the chair you were sitting on and followed Kiku up the stairs from the basement, only to see Ludwig and Feliciano sitting in the living room, with the allies knocked out and tied together on the lounge floor. You and Kiku raised your eyebrows at them.
"Well, that was interesting" Ludwig muttered, looking over to the Italian.
Feliciano grinned, "I had no idea what I was doing".
You laughed, as Feli and Ludwig stood up and made they're way out the door, with you and Kiku following close behind.
Feliciano and Ludwig sat in the front of the van with Ludwig driving, while you and Kiku sat in the back. You felt a little awkward, fiddling nervously with your hands.
"Uh, _________?" The Japanese man asked. You looked up in his direction.
"[1]....Anata O Muchu Nano[2]" Kiku mumbled, his face glowing bright red. You smiled, also blushing.
"I love you too, Kiku" you hurried forwards and sat beside him, taking hold of his hand. Kiku shook nervously, biting his lip. Your hand was warm against his.
"Thanks for saving me" you whispered, leaning forward and kissing him gently on the cheek, "I really appreciate it".

1: I Love You
2: I'm Crazy About You
Another request finished! WIN!

This was requested by :iconstarrocket12:
Sorry for the wait, I've been pretty busy with schoolwork and stuff :3

Anyway, first Japan x Reader I've written! He's hard to write for! It's hard to write him romantic, anyway!

So, hope you like this. The ending was kind of rushed, but hopefully its okay :)
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PokePowerGirl100 Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Feliciano grinned, "I had no idea what I was doing".

LOLOLOLOLOLOL and the best part is that sounds exactly like me XDDDDDD

 You stood from the chair you were sitting on and followed Kiku up the stairs from the basement, only to see Ludwig and Feliciano sitting in the living room, with the allies knocked out and tied together on the lounge floor. You and Kiku raised your eyebrows at them.
"Well, that was interesting" Ludwig muttered, looking over to the Italian.
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Hetaliafreak1235 Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh God it's so cute!!! ^▼^
so....... ccute! ^^ great job
CarrotSoren May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyouu! :)
welcome ^^ :iconyayjapanplz:
TheSpaceBagel Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was one of the awesomest things I have ever read.
ALL OF MY GOOD RATINGS *throws down 11/10 ratings, accidentally hits Russia*
GAH! *runs away*
CarrotSoren Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAY! And don't worry, Russia wont hurt you, he's a sweet bby :3 Hehe this means alot!
SpiritCatt Oct 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh. my. god. THEY HAVE THEIR OWN VAN?!
CarrotSoren Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, and its a WHITE VAN :3
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